Lonely.
Empty.
Something something.
Hiding in the shell of my undoing.
Poet's Corner
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- Pager
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Re: Poet's Corner
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You are aware you've just summed up 33 years of my existence?Pager wrote:Lonely.
Empty.
Something something.
Hiding in the shell of my undoing.
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
- Pager
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No direction intended, eMTe.
But it did make someone think, and thus I can call it poetry.
But it did make someone think, and thus I can call it poetry.
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Id actually prefer the 'yes' answer.
If issues are not directed they lose their natural innate power and become shallow generalisations about human condition in general. For example, regarding my last rant, the perfect explanation of the poem is "author was drunk, because he had unsuccessful date". If there is anything else to find in there it's accidental. (or not, depends on your understanding of accidental)
Of course this is what I think now about poetry, it may change with time.
If issues are not directed they lose their natural innate power and become shallow generalisations about human condition in general. For example, regarding my last rant, the perfect explanation of the poem is "author was drunk, because he had unsuccessful date". If there is anything else to find in there it's accidental. (or not, depends on your understanding of accidental)
Of course this is what I think now about poetry, it may change with time.
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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Ok...long answer...
That was written from the rememberance of a frame of mind I once had, and it has forever left its imprint.
And if I bypass my reasoning long enough I am still able to visit...kind of reading posts without officially logging in.
That was written from the rememberance of a frame of mind I once had, and it has forever left its imprint.
And if I bypass my reasoning long enough I am still able to visit...kind of reading posts without officially logging in.
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fiercety and anxiety
familiarity propriety
futurexity
study of troth diz/zy/understanding of sy/
zyxety and emtety
dua - you check and both
exotic and familiar
thy island that island they left thy monuments
0/1 but
this is where you keep going and you keep going
you keep getting younger /ali (movie/drummer)and younger
you keep getting older and lder/older
and you keeE (!) p getting
in a moment the time stops
but you keep inging this whole inging thingy
ringing bringing observing
having talking
scaring
deep scaring fearing
fearing songing lyricking observing whatrvering posting
minding interfering meeeing
notmuch ofde songlyriking
influensing
espering/aspiring
per aspira ad so wat is you difrens br danring/
scan/skan blahblahdifrensring
wot wi ol post now is truicity?
familiarity propriety
futurexity
study of troth diz/zy/understanding of sy/
zyxety and emtety
dua - you check and both
exotic and familiar
thy island that island they left thy monuments
0/1 but
this is where you keep going and you keep going
you keep getting younger /ali (movie/drummer)and younger
you keep getting older and lder/older
and you keeE (!) p getting
in a moment the time stops
but you keep inging this whole inging thingy
ringing bringing observing
having talking
scaring
deep scaring fearing
fearing songing lyricking observing whatrvering posting
minding interfering meeeing
notmuch ofde songlyriking
influensing
espering/aspiring
per aspira ad so wat is you difrens br danring/
scan/skan blahblahdifrensring
wot wi ol post now is truicity?
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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Niewielu odważyło się
jak dotąd
odwiedzić skraj lasu
Żaden brąz jeszcze nie wbił się w błękit
jak dotąd
odwiedzić skraj lasu
Żaden brąz jeszcze nie wbił się w błękit
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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december -- one month after the end of the world
strange calm
you think about all this past that will never become future
you think about distant oceans that will never wash your feet
somewhere little girl is crying
but who is a crying girl if not a wooden chair
you, girl
her tears, ocean
chair --- or was it a lamp
letters unwritten, lines, squares
dots
grass will take over the undared
strange calm
you think about all this past that will never become future
you think about distant oceans that will never wash your feet
somewhere little girl is crying
but who is a crying girl if not a wooden chair
you, girl
her tears, ocean
chair --- or was it a lamp
letters unwritten, lines, squares
dots
grass will take over the undared
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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they sailed to find
but they found
what happened to be most surprising
for the discoverers
there was no sign of passion
no sign of retreat
ocean merged with ocean
sail merged with sail
but they found
what happened to be most surprising
for the discoverers
there was no sign of passion
no sign of retreat
ocean merged with ocean
sail merged with sail
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you
mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you
mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you
mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you
they come from finland
and they come from poland
and they come from ethiopia
but what they gonna do
is look at you
hey boy hey girl
what you gonna do
when they look at you
they act like mirrors
and they act like lakes
but what they gonna do
is look at you
what they gonna do
is f*** you through
and what you gonna do
is f*** them through
sad toys
what we're gonna do
is what we're gonna do
what you gonna do when they look at you
mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you
mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you
mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you
they come from finland
and they come from poland
and they come from ethiopia
but what they gonna do
is look at you
hey boy hey girl
what you gonna do
when they look at you
they act like mirrors
and they act like lakes
but what they gonna do
is look at you
what they gonna do
is f*** you through
and what you gonna do
is f*** them through
sad toys
what we're gonna do
is what we're gonna do
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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splash and splash again
splash and splash again
splash and splash again
like a train or rain
like a train or rain
like a train or rain
what is train
what's rain
what is train
what's rain
what is train
what's rain
they caught a jesus here today
hugging the street lamp
oh so scared
comes from helsinki
but again
what is a jesus or a man
who is a sinner what is hell
is "t"rain the rain again?
is ain the vibe or enter/t/ain
where hides his majesty's curtain?
(when the darkness came emte explained the above verses to his friends and they all agreed to show above verses to nobody but them above and the darkness proved right. but suddenly a cloude from elsewhere appeared wanting to turn them words into golde. and the cloud was present and it was greene and blue.)
splash and splash again
splash and splash again
like a train or rain
like a train or rain
like a train or rain
what is train
what's rain
what is train
what's rain
what is train
what's rain
they caught a jesus here today
hugging the street lamp
oh so scared
comes from helsinki
but again
what is a jesus or a man
who is a sinner what is hell
is "t"rain the rain again?
is ain the vibe or enter/t/ain
where hides his majesty's curtain?
(when the darkness came emte explained the above verses to his friends and they all agreed to show above verses to nobody but them above and the darkness proved right. but suddenly a cloude from elsewhere appeared wanting to turn them words into golde. and the cloud was present and it was greene and blue.)
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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oh Julie
what have we done
dusty cable on the floor
taste of your gaiter
both probably relate somehow
but not yet, and maybe not in comparison
love was probably never meant for the human beings
worlds open for others
colours
maybe memories
tears loads of tears
0/1
forthcoming
others
fingers excavating gums
words speaking desert wars
valleys break they meet skies
skies break they meet valleys
and this final
this very never final
where hides the human who knows me
guitar
and comforts me and is never wrong
finalne
valleys break they meet skies
skies break they meet valleys
what have we done
dusty cable on the floor
taste of your gaiter
both probably relate somehow
but not yet, and maybe not in comparison
love was probably never meant for the human beings
worlds open for others
colours
maybe memories
tears loads of tears
0/1
forthcoming
others
fingers excavating gums
words speaking desert wars
valleys break they meet skies
skies break they meet valleys
and this final
this very never final
where hides the human who knows me
guitar
and comforts me and is never wrong
finalne
valleys break they meet skies
skies break they meet valleys
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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and in the end
we'll create The New Universe
eternally aforementioned
circles of handshakes
triangles of nods
between memory and future
we will force everything to become everything
like fire fox we will go blank
everytime anything goes wrong
bananas pernilla wiberg
we'll create The New Universe
eternally aforementioned
circles of handshakes
triangles of nods
between memory and future
we will force everything to become everything
like fire fox we will go blank
everytime anything goes wrong
bananas pernilla wiberg
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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Hereby, I choose three random people, let's call them Consul, Londoner and Mlw.
I force you to come to some emotional conclusion within a period of 10 days and number of 100 posts
By emotional conclusion I mean that you'll have to post similarly-sounding posts (in logic and generally understood tone)
The task is godlike
By godlike task I mean the task that must be fulfilled in order to please the god
So, questioning the rules or their general uncoherency is not available
As a god I require you to use all your available brain/body quirks to fulfill the task
Remember, it's just for this game
Other members will rate your results and approach
Remember, the task is to come to agreement
I force you to come to some emotional conclusion within a period of 10 days and number of 100 posts
By emotional conclusion I mean that you'll have to post similarly-sounding posts (in logic and generally understood tone)
The task is godlike
By godlike task I mean the task that must be fulfilled in order to please the god
So, questioning the rules or their general uncoherency is not available
As a god I require you to use all your available brain/body quirks to fulfill the task
Remember, it's just for this game
Other members will rate your results and approach
Remember, the task is to come to agreement
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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Me and Marie
We were walking the autumn alley
And she hugged and she said
Look darling --- there is so many leaves falling
How about killing a random child
I had objections -- after all randomness is a debatable term
I said - let's define the ocean and sky first
I said - why not kick the homeless first
Let's kick him and hear the scream
We'll find our love in his suffering
Why kill?
I said - I played the piano when I was one's random child
I have some money left - I will play the piano again
But lovewar is blind
We carefully staged the murder
third world flight
Hints mind games FBI 0/1 all this all this oh you c'mon
Moons rising monshines taking over
We killed random kike and random nigger
for the benefit of eternal war
we danced to the music
that nobody understands
We were walking the autumn alley
And she hugged and she said
Look darling --- there is so many leaves falling
How about killing a random child
I had objections -- after all randomness is a debatable term
I said - let's define the ocean and sky first
I said - why not kick the homeless first
Let's kick him and hear the scream
We'll find our love in his suffering
Why kill?
I said - I played the piano when I was one's random child
I have some money left - I will play the piano again
But lovewar is blind
We carefully staged the murder
third world flight
Hints mind games FBI 0/1 all this all this oh you c'mon
Moons rising monshines taking over
We killed random kike and random nigger
for the benefit of eternal war
we danced to the music
that nobody understands
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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We're getting out of here
Experience forms a cone
Merging maps with territories
we achieve what?
View of self-conscious empty chair?
Words roll down like tears
Wars roll down like city streets
We're getting out of here
Yes, we're finally getting out of here
crucified on a coordinate system
Again and again and again
Myriads of marching tiny suicides
Committed every minute
The neverending pink cactus
Experience forms a cone
Merging maps with territories
we achieve what?
View of self-conscious empty chair?
Words roll down like tears
Wars roll down like city streets
We're getting out of here
Yes, we're finally getting out of here
crucified on a coordinate system
Again and again and again
Myriads of marching tiny suicides
Committed every minute
The neverending pink cactus
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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So it's finally comin'
Yeah you baby four-legged chair
Yeah you baby four-legged chair
It's finally comin'
Stones trees computers they will say
That you drove me from them away
But I love only you
and only what you say I care
and only to you I dare to say
whatever human ever dared to say
Baby it's a meaning
Oh darling it's a feeling
Screaming random words yeah baby it's a driving meaning
Yeah it's pure beauty and light it's emotional dreaming
Life is emotional dreaming
Life is emotional dreaming
Yeah baby chair
baby sky baby ocean
Life is emotional dreaming
Yeah you baby four-legged chair
Yeah you baby four-legged chair
It's finally comin'
Stones trees computers they will say
That you drove me from them away
But I love only you
and only what you say I care
and only to you I dare to say
whatever human ever dared to say
Baby it's a meaning
Oh darling it's a feeling
Screaming random words yeah baby it's a driving meaning
Yeah it's pure beauty and light it's emotional dreaming
Life is emotional dreaming
Life is emotional dreaming
Yeah baby chair
baby sky baby ocean
Life is emotional dreaming
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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One Zyx One Pole
One love One hate
One forest we want to cut
One forest we want to save
So many dudes nursed to abide
Let ugly girl express her hidden feelings
Let human in his wheelchair express his darkest meanings
Let any given male show his tears
Now, oh you my friend, oh you were probably interested in philosophy
and you oh my friend you were interested in your mother and father
but oh you girl you were probably interested in your siblings and former relationships
But let them all memories turn into rhythm
Let them all your personally unkown musicians turn your poems into happiness
One zero one one
One zero one one
One two one three
You hear people running outside your door
One love One hate
One forest we want to cut
One forest we want to save
So many dudes nursed to abide
Let ugly girl express her hidden feelings
Let human in his wheelchair express his darkest meanings
Let any given male show his tears
Now, oh you my friend, oh you were probably interested in philosophy
and you oh my friend you were interested in your mother and father
but oh you girl you were probably interested in your siblings and former relationships
But let them all memories turn into rhythm
Let them all your personally unkown musicians turn your poems into happiness
One zero one one
One zero one one
One two one three
You hear people running outside your door
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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I said: I know a place
where cats go to die
I asked: Do you want to see it?
She answered: I don't want to
I said: It's bright and meaningful
I said: It's pure and virgin
I asked: Do you want to see it?
She answered: I don't want to
She said it in such a way
that I had to turn away from her
From that moment
I am slowly
approaching
the way out
---
by: Marcin Świetlicki
where cats go to die
I asked: Do you want to see it?
She answered: I don't want to
I said: It's bright and meaningful
I said: It's pure and virgin
I asked: Do you want to see it?
She answered: I don't want to
She said it in such a way
that I had to turn away from her
From that moment
I am slowly
approaching
the way out
---
by: Marcin Świetlicki
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)
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Yes you can be one of many stars
Yes you can't be one of many stars
From that moment you are nearing death
From that moment you're not nearing death
Yes you water you are not the sky
Yes you water you are but the sky
Oh you Universe you can be the road
Oh you asphalt jungle you can be the world
Oh you zero you can be the one
All you All you oh
have so much fun
Yes you can't be one of many stars
From that moment you are nearing death
From that moment you're not nearing death
Yes you water you are not the sky
Yes you water you are but the sky
Oh you Universe you can be the road
Oh you asphalt jungle you can be the world
Oh you zero you can be the one
All you All you oh
have so much fun
"As you have noticed over the years, we are not angry people." (itebygur)