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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by Pager » Sat Nov 23, 2013 5:09

Lonely.
Empty.
Something something.
Hiding in the shell of my undoing.
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Sat Nov 23, 2013 11:02

Pager wrote:Lonely.
Empty.
Something something.
Hiding in the shell of my undoing.
You are aware you've just summed up 33 years of my existence?
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by Pager » Sun Nov 24, 2013 4:56

No direction intended, eMTe.
But it did make someone think, and thus I can call it poetry.
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Sun Nov 24, 2013 21:54

Id actually prefer the 'yes' answer. 8)

If issues are not directed they lose their natural innate power and become shallow generalisations about human condition in general. For example, regarding my last rant, the perfect explanation of the poem is "author was drunk, because he had unsuccessful date". If there is anything else to find in there it's accidental. (or not, depends on your understanding of accidental)

Of course this is what I think now about poetry, it may change with time. 8)
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by Pager » Sun Nov 24, 2013 23:43

Ok...long answer...
That was written from the rememberance of a frame of mind I once had, and it has forever left its imprint.
And if I bypass my reasoning long enough I am still able to visit...kind of reading posts without officially logging in.
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Thu Dec 05, 2013 1:54

fiercety and anxiety
familiarity propriety
futurexity
study of troth diz/zy/understanding of sy/

zyxety and emtety

dua - you check and both
exotic and familiar

thy island that island they left thy monuments
0/1 but
this is where you keep going and you keep going
you keep getting younger /ali (movie/drummer)and younger
you keep getting older and lder/older
and you keeE (!) p getting

in a moment the time stops

but you keep inging this whole inging thingy
ringing bringing observing
having talking

scaring
deep scaring fearing
fearing songing lyricking observing whatrvering posting
minding interfering meeeing

notmuch ofde songlyriking
influensing

espering/aspiring

per aspira ad so wat is you difrens br danring/
scan/skan blahblahdifrensring

wot wi ol post now is truicity?
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Thu Dec 05, 2013 14:53

Niewielu odważyło się
jak dotąd
odwiedzić skraj lasu

Żaden brąz jeszcze nie wbił się w błękit
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Fri Dec 06, 2013 23:05

december -- one month after the end of the world
strange calm

you think about all this past that will never become future
you think about distant oceans that will never wash your feet

somewhere little girl is crying
but who is a crying girl if not a wooden chair

you, girl
her tears, ocean

chair --- or was it a lamp
letters unwritten, lines, squares
dots

grass will take over the undared
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Tue Feb 04, 2014 1:54

they sailed to find
but they found

what happened to be most surprising
for the discoverers
there was no sign of passion
no sign of retreat

ocean merged with ocean
sail merged with sail
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Fri Feb 07, 2014 2:06

mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you

mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you

mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you

mad toys mad toys
what you gonna do when they look at you

they come from finland
and they come from poland
and they come from ethiopia
but what they gonna do
is look at you

hey boy hey girl
what you gonna do
when they look at you

they act like mirrors
and they act like lakes

but what they gonna do
is look at you

what they gonna do
is f*** you through

and what you gonna do
is f*** them through

sad toys
what we're gonna do
is what we're gonna do
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Sat Feb 15, 2014 4:06

splash and splash again
splash and splash again
splash and splash again

like a train or rain
like a train or rain
like a train or rain

what is train
what's rain

what is train
what's rain

what is train
what's rain

they caught a jesus here today
hugging the street lamp
oh so scared

comes from helsinki
but again
what is a jesus or a man
who is a sinner what is hell

is "t"rain the rain again?
is ain the vibe or enter/t/ain

where hides his majesty's curtain?

(when the darkness came emte explained the above verses to his friends and they all agreed to show above verses to nobody but them above and the darkness proved right. but suddenly a cloude from elsewhere appeared wanting to turn them words into golde. and the cloud was present and it was greene and blue.)
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Fri May 02, 2014 17:52

oh Julie
what have we done

dusty cable on the floor
taste of your gaiter

both probably relate somehow
but not yet, and maybe not in comparison

love was probably never meant for the human beings

worlds open for others
colours
maybe memories
tears loads of tears

0/1

forthcoming
others

fingers excavating gums
words speaking desert wars

valleys break they meet skies
skies break they meet valleys

and this final
this very never final
where hides the human who knows me
guitar
and comforts me and is never wrong
finalne



valleys break they meet skies
skies break they meet valleys
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Thu May 15, 2014 14:57

and in the end
we'll create The New Universe

eternally aforementioned

circles of handshakes
triangles of nods

between memory and future
we will force everything to become everything

like fire fox we will go blank
everytime anything goes wrong

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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Mon May 19, 2014 0:18

Hereby, I choose three random people, let's call them Consul, Londoner and Mlw.
I force you to come to some emotional conclusion within a period of 10 days and number of 100 posts
By emotional conclusion I mean that you'll have to post similarly-sounding posts (in logic and generally understood tone)

The task is godlike
By godlike task I mean the task that must be fulfilled in order to please the god
So, questioning the rules or their general uncoherency is not available

As a god I require you to use all your available brain/body quirks to fulfill the task
Remember, it's just for this game

Other members will rate your results and approach

Remember, the task is to come to agreement
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Wed Jun 04, 2014 0:54

Me and Marie
We were walking the autumn alley

And she hugged and she said
Look darling --- there is so many leaves falling
How about killing a random child

I had objections -- after all randomness is a debatable term
I said - let's define the ocean and sky first
I said - why not kick the homeless first
Let's kick him and hear the scream
We'll find our love in his suffering
Why kill?

I said - I played the piano when I was one's random child
I have some money left - I will play the piano again

But lovewar is blind

We carefully staged the murder
third world flight
Hints mind games FBI 0/1 all this all this oh you c'mon
Moons rising monshines taking over
We killed random kike and random nigger

for the benefit of eternal war
we danced to the music
that nobody understands
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Fri Jun 06, 2014 2:22

We're getting out of here

Experience forms a cone
Merging maps with territories
we achieve what?
View of self-conscious empty chair?

Words roll down like tears
Wars roll down like city streets

We're getting out of here
Yes, we're finally getting out of here
crucified on a coordinate system

Again and again and again
Myriads of marching tiny suicides
Committed every minute

The neverending pink cactus
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Sat Jun 07, 2014 14:41

So it's finally comin'
Yeah you baby four-legged chair

Yeah you baby four-legged chair
It's finally comin'

Stones trees computers they will say
That you drove me from them away

But I love only you
and only what you say I care
and only to you I dare to say
whatever human ever dared to say

Baby it's a meaning
Oh darling it's a feeling
Screaming random words yeah baby it's a driving meaning
Yeah it's pure beauty and light it's emotional dreaming

Life is emotional dreaming
Life is emotional dreaming
Yeah baby chair
baby sky baby ocean
Life is emotional dreaming
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Wed Jun 11, 2014 23:43

One Zyx One Pole
One love One hate

One forest we want to cut
One forest we want to save
So many dudes nursed to abide

Let ugly girl express her hidden feelings
Let human in his wheelchair express his darkest meanings
Let any given male show his tears

Now, oh you my friend, oh you were probably interested in philosophy
and you oh my friend you were interested in your mother and father
but oh you girl you were probably interested in your siblings and former relationships

But let them all memories turn into rhythm
Let them all your personally unkown musicians turn your poems into happiness

One zero one one
One zero one one

One two one three
You hear people running outside your door
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Thu Jun 19, 2014 12:43

I said: I know a place
where cats go to die
I asked: Do you want to see it?
She answered: I don't want to

I said: It's bright and meaningful
I said: It's pure and virgin
I asked: Do you want to see it?
She answered: I don't want to

She said it in such a way
that I had to turn away from her
From that moment
I am slowly
approaching
the way out

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by: Marcin Świetlicki
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Re: Poet's Corner

Post by eMTe » Fri Jul 04, 2014 5:00

Yes you can be one of many stars
Yes you can't be one of many stars

From that moment you are nearing death
From that moment you're not nearing death

Yes you water you are not the sky
Yes you water you are but the sky

Oh you Universe you can be the road
Oh you asphalt jungle you can be the world

Oh you zero you can be the one
All you All you oh
have so much fun
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